User talk:Hal Homsar Solo/Homsolo Saves Club Penguin

May I just add one thing; I read up until the last chapter for now, but you appear to have a few problems, out of no fault of your own. Instead of had, it's have, I can see two "Had"s that should be haves. and Adress is Address. Thanks, -- Eternal Magma    Complaints ahoy!  08:18, June 14, 2010 (UTC)