User blog:Sir Jjoeyxx/Dojo Story

Hiya guys! Sorry I haven't blogged in ages, stupid bug stopped me from editing anything. Anyway, here's my new story that we will develop on CP! Remember, this is only the preview.

'It was late at night, the ninjas had long gone from the place of training. I sat there, perched on a rock outside, staring into the dazzling star-filled sky, the moon shining brightly down on me. Clouds covered the moon's reflection, and after yielding the light in my hand, I lit the closest lantern with a flame of hope. The snow had towered over the Dojo, and a shadow emerged from the hideout. I was amazed to see the figure of Sensei before me. He spoke to me, with his wise words coming out as, "You must go home, grasshopper. The Dojo is crumbling. Leave me here, and behold your own home as your restplace tonight," With the fall of a single snowflake on the avalanche, the hideout collapsed behind him. "Observe..." he whispered, as I steadily tiptoed down the steps to my igloo, where Tra and Fotty were staying that night.'

Does the preview sound good?! Leave a comment with your thoughts! I promise to put as much people as I can in the story, including Green Ninja, Super Miron, Fottymaddy, TraGiggles and PixieLil!FULL STORY COMING SOON!

-Jjoeyxx