User blog:Koloway/The Card-Jitsu Kid Chapter One

It was a cold morning, like usual in Club Penguin. Same games, Same name: Koloway Larusso, same friends.. But then my mom told me we were moving. I didn't like this at all. That would mean I would have to leave all my friends, my school... This wasn't cool at all. We soon moved and I made zero friends. None. *MONTHS LATER* I woke up. I still went to school, though today was the Halloween dance, and I asked the girl I liked to the dance, Ali. WITH AN I. She said yes and we went. *THAT NIGHT* *3rd Person Point Of View* Koloway was having the best time at the dance with Ali. Then her jealous ex, Johnny, and his crew of Karate members training at the Tusk Dojo. They jumped him, beat him bad. It was a horrible sight to see, for ANYONE. Then came sensei. Sensei took them all on, 6 vs 1. Sensei won, leaving others in defeat. Later that day, Koloway saw sensei. "Why'd you do that, and WHO are you!?!?!?!" Koloway practically yelled. "My name Sensei. Me help boy when boy was at unfair advantage," Sensei replied to Koloway's exclamation, " I was good Card-Jitsu player, what the Tusk Dojo plays. Would boy like training?" Koloway then replied with a Yes! and they went to the Dojo. He gave Koloway a deck of cards, and Koloway faced sensei. Sensei beat Koloway in three turns. He then trained him, and took him to the Card Shop where he could spend coins on cards. Koloway purchased a lot of new cards and improved his deck. Battles with sensei were won equally between Koloway and Sensei and they were very long. Koloway was good. But he always wanted to challenge others, to which sensei replied: "Fighting, no good. Should never want to fight, unless have to." *end chapter 1* So, How did you guys like that? Any comments? Leave them down below in the comments, thanks! Koloway